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markoman21 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Good sir, you and the fellow who requested this story had imaginations of godly power. This story made me cry THREE times! It probably was trying only twice! I give "Forbidden love" my tear stained seal of approval and a 5/5. Can't say the same for it's sequal due to the simple fact I got bored a couple of times (oddly during the multi-chapter fights) and skipped a few bits. Well done you magnificent god of writing!
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XD-385 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Writer
Wow... ^^; What parts tugged at your heartstrings the most?
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markoman21 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Also, I forgot to put this in the other comments, but the scenes when Ashton just loses his shit and goes over the edge (case in point, chapter 7, I think) were done beautifally and made me a bit giddy when I read them due to my love of scenes such as those.
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markoman21 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
*SPOILERS ALERT*
Serra's death and "return" made me bawl my eyes out. Simply the bad memories of that scene made me cry when the simply MENTIONED it a few chapters later. That ending.... That mother-#&^%(^@ ending made me bawl my eyes out again. It's like "happy happy marriage" and then "EVERYONE YOU LOVED IS DEAD!!" Also shed some tears for Sigfried. Again, well done you descendant of Apollo (or whatever greek god was for literature)!
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pikminnom Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
i sence the aura of missing chapters
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XD-385 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
Some can't be posted here, but the story section of AGNPH was recently put back up. The entire story can be found there.
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Cyber-Hand Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
OH MY GOD YOU ARE THE WRITER OF RUKARIO ROMANCE AND FORBIDDEN LOVE
just want to say i read this series on AGNPH and loved them, this one more than Rukario romance though
have you got any more stories planned i would love to read more of your stuff
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XD-385 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Writer
Sorry for the incredibly long wait, but yes. I am trying hard to wrap up Rukario Romance and have started on a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic story as well, though that may not be interesting to you if you're not into that show.
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Cyber-Hand Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
my girlfriend is trying to turn me into a brony, and you story might just be the push I need.
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XD-385 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Writer
Well, if you end up liking it, I would appreciate reviews.
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