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As promised, I have taken this story down after one week. I appreciate the feedback.
This is the first chapter of a story I am writing that I intend to publish. I have put it up on Deviantart to see if I am heading in the right direction with the plot and style of writing.
Since this is a part of a story that I plan on publishing, I will be taking it down one week from today.
All characters mentioned are copyright to me.
Since this is a part of a story that I plan on publishing, I will be taking it down one week from today.
All characters mentioned are copyright to me.
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